Mr. Drake's Woodpile-Poem
62He's at it again.
Each day the tier grows higher.
Sticks on sticks,
birches and maples
wedged and shoved and made to fit
and get along.
Mr.Drake is toe-deep in sawdust.
His mind is busy
and I cough when I approach.
One mustn't sneak up on woodpilers.
You can't tell what time they're in.
He smiles.
He is glade for the interruption
and the lemonade I bring.
He knows I won't stay long.
Mr. Drake is tall
but bent a bit,
and his eyes are always in
November.
Wrinkled hands lift the plastic glass.
Too many seasons handling wood I think.
We sit and draw on our drinks.
I want him to start,
to speak on pungs and plows
and all those people who sleep
in the tall steeples'
shadow;
people who have handled his heart
and know his word is good.
But he won't.
Not now.
Not today.
I form an opinion on the coming winter.
He thinks otherwise.
A compliment on his wood
seasoned and sound.
He agrees.
I point to a cord of newly split apple.
"Father and I planted those," he says.
Mr. Drake gets up to be closer to his father.
The apple is near the shed,
some already safe under cover.
Then he starts in on slow burning wood stoves,
while I'm pondering.
"They're safe," I say finally.
He won't agree
He needn't go on...
I've got a wood heater and I know
what forms adultery can take.
He puts down the glass
as a signal
to let him go back
to that other time,
before me and lemonade came along.
But I'll be back
when frost comes creeping
up sill and spine.
I'll take him beans and biscuits.
Then's the time for talk.
I'll know it's the best of winter
when we get
down to apple.
CommentsLoading...
"and all those people who sleep
in the tall steeples'
shadow;"
Great line!
Up and awesome!
Dear Radioguy...such a lovely poem. I love the way you described Mr.Drake. Your style of writing is..real and earthy..Thank you for sharing.
Sunnie
Excellent piece! You have an honest, down-to-earth style that is also unique and creative. Up and awesome.
..well this is a tremendous character study from a tremendous writer - I love your Norman Rockwell imagery here ......
This is an awesome poem, great lines throughout your piece....as always ...you have done a great job....voted up













mckbirdbks Level 8 Commenter 14 months ago
This is tremendous. Very well done. I could easily mistake it from 'A Sand County Almanac', it's that good.